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If I told you
How beautiful you are
Would you believe?
Would you doubt my testement
That the beat of my heart
Suddenly fast, then slow, fast, then slow
Only happens when I am around you
I would give you anything, everything.
But would you believe?

If I whispered to you sweet things
Would you believe?
Or would you dismiss them
as sweet nothings?
If I let you know my dreams
Would you have faith they would come true
If I told you
I Love You
Would you believe
Or just think it a careful lie?
2-18-2005
Raven Marie Shadows
©2005-2010 *RavensTear
:iconravenstear:

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enjoy my softer side

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:iconobsidian-nightfire:
God, How the fuck could I have not commented on your works?! GRRR i feel like i've let you down :hug: the poem however is very wonderful babes. Good job. I like this side of you.
:iconravenstear:
You can never let me down babe. :hug: Thank you... and it seems everyone but me loves my sensitive side... *sighs* you will probably see more of it once i get steady net access.. cause i found like six songs i had written.

--
"Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever."
~ by Anonymous ~

Bitter the secret Furie

We are all mad but the expressions can get confusing. Just remember we are all mad- Me
:iconravenstear:
thank you. I am pleased people like it.. its a break from my angst ridden stuff. It was kinda refreshing to write

--
"Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever."
~ by Anonymous ~

Bitter the secret Furie

We are all mad but the expressions can get confusing. Just remember we are all mad- Me
:iconalred45:
this is a great poem it really shows how sad life can be this is excellent

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ET
:iconravenstear:
Thank you. I am glad you like it.

--
"Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever."
~ by Anonymous ~

Bitter the secret Furie

We are all mad but the expressions can get confusing. Just remember we are all mad- Me
:icondisturbedhippiechic:
wow...so sad. i like it, good job! :#1: keep it up!

--
What is it with Dogs and Dishwashers?
Living is easy with eyes closed - The Beatles
Poisoned Hearts Can Never Change - AFI
:iconravenstear:
LOL i surely will.... though why all you like my soft side i don't know....thanks for the encouragement

--
"Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever."
~ by Anonymous ~

Bitter the secret Furie

We are all mad but the expressions can get confusing. Just remember we are all mad- Me
:icondisturbedhippiechic:
:D your welcome, lol, anyone would like anyones soft side!lmao

--
What is it with Dogs and Dishwashers?
Living is easy with eyes closed - The Beatles
Poisoned Hearts Can Never Change - AFI
:iconnitefire:
I like it. Your shouls explore this side more often.

--
It's blinky light chaos around here! And how are you?

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