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Pitiful little girl

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Pitiful little girl
Lying on the bed
Crying tears in the dark
Screaming in your head
Is it any wonder you don’t fear the dead?

The pain hurts so deep
Like a knife in your gut
Twisting shredding your precarious self control
Wanting and needing to blow up

Why does this world make you cry?
Like rain falling from the ebon sky
Rushing rivers of saltine tears
Come now and face your fears

By: Ebon Darkness
Now Known as Raven Maries Shadows
Um... Something written a long time ago about when i first met obsidian-nightfire. Its not my best but it holds a special place in my book. Anyway thats about it. Ya... written before my pen name changed.
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Earthriseii's avatar
i like this, it has a lot of meaning, and also has a nice rythum (i can't remember how to spell all of a sudden). Beautiful :)