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She just wants to be pretty by ~RavensTear:iconRavensTear:



She dyes her hair all the right colors
and smiles that sweet smile
Picks the clothes that are perfect
and strikes a great pose
But she never feels its enough
always worried she will be left behind

She just wants to be pretty
to know there is someone who cares
She just wants to be loved.
I wonder does she know she already is.

She writes in simple meter
her deepest fears
She plays down her intelligence
tries not to intimidated
but she always feels out of place
she is afraid she is too far ahead

She just wants to be pretty
to have someone understand
She just wants to be loved
I wonder does she know she already is

She avoids conflicts whenever possible
and runs from perceived anger
she tries to be supportive
beyond the expected
but she always feels she is lacking
always worried that they lie.

She just wants to be pretty
to know they will be there
she just wants to be loved
I wonder does she know she already is.

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©2006-2009 ~RavensTear
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Submitted: March 3, 2006
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Written while i was thinking about a piece by ~obsidian-nightfire called I just want to be pretty for you. You should check it out if you haven't already. She is an amazing photographer and poet. Anyway this is just a poem i put together based on that idea.
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I do like this poem. I remember when you first wrote it. I'm glad you submitted it. Now I get to fav it and print it when Im at the library to stick up in my car.
*laughs* i remember writing it. You mentioned the pic. I was instantly inspired.. woohoo poem is now going to be on your cars ceiling.... *dances kinda not really*

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Find my soul and I'm yours forever."
~ by Anonymous ~
As i look through the lock on the chains around my soul i see tears are just the souls way of bleeding-me

Bitter the secret Furie
I definetly know how the girl in this poem feels. Always afraid to show her real self, afraid they'll see something that will make them leave. Beautiful.

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:hug: you shouldn't have to know how that feels.

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"Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever."
~ by Anonymous ~
As i look through the lock on the chains around my soul i see tears are just the souls way of bleeding-me

Bitter the secret Furie
That has a real nice effect to it! lol I likes it!
Thank you

--
"Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever."
~ by Anonymous ~
As i look through the lock on the chains around my soul i see tears are just the souls way of bleeding-me

Bitter the secret Furie
Glad you like it... Do relate to the writer... or the person being written about?

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"Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever."
~ by Anonymous ~
As i look through the lock on the chains around my soul i see tears are just the souls way of bleeding-me

Bitter the secret Furie

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