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HAPPY

It is so strange to wake up and be glad to see another day
It is so unusual to smile over next to nothing
It is so hard to act as though nothing lights up my life
So hard to pretend that I donít love you

It is so crazy to believe that some one may be right for me
That I may be able to feel so happy
To think only of you my every waking moment
To want to make you smile at every second
To want to steal the world for you

If you asked for it I would do my best to get it
If you demanded my action
I would do my best to perform
I would die at a word or live for eternity just to see light in your eyes

I live to see you happy
To see you safe from harm
And I would be happy too
If I had you here in my arms

It feels so strange to feel so elated
To be in such agonizing ecstasy
I feel so happy
But Iíd be happier to hold you in my arms
4-24-04
Raven Marie Shadows....
ok... i hate my so called happy poetry... hate hate hate.... knowing my luck being it is the curse of DA everyone will love it.... personally i think all my old stuff sucks but you know whatever if you all like it then hey it must be decent huh?.... i will stop fussing over what i consider awful.....and just start posting everything i have written.....

anyway i thought i was happy when i wrote this i found out later i was delusional or something cause i was very misearble in a pleasant way if that makes sense....ya it all fell apart right after this...damn love....it sucks ass.... enjoy.....
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silentHILLfan131 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student Artist
You remind me a lot of a friend of mine... That just means you're absolutely wonderful of course!!! :')
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1121113 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
This stunning artwork is featured here YOU. .Let me thank you so much for being an inspiration for many artists and for for inviting others to you.May your days be as colourful as a rainbow. :heart::holly:
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RavensTear Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010  Student General Artist
Thank you so much for the feature. :blush: This is a first for me. I am really excited. Thank you so much again. Much love and well wishes your way.
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MissMurderFish Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
I kinda like this. It comes across feeling slightly to...poem-y, if you know what I mean.
Its certainly not the worst 'happy' thing I've come across, but not the best either. :/


Kudos for trying and posting it though.
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RavensTear Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009  Student General Artist
thanks for the honesty. its good to know its not total crap but its not fantastic either. i really don't know how to express happiness. its not something i feel very often.
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MissMurderFish Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Join the club. >.<'
But hopefully you feel it more often!
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L-i-N-h Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2009
wow thats pretty damn good!
i really like how you contrasted happiness with love.
:P it's a really cute poem, even though you dislike it.
i like your modesty, cute.

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RavensTear Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2009  Student General Artist
:blush: thanks. I really am not to fond of the happy poetry. it just feels like its missing something to me. its an unusual feeling for me so i don't really know how to express it. Glad that you like it though. Hopefully i will eventually get more comfortable with that aspect of the art of poetry.
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L-i-N-h Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2009
well written! it's really cute
i love it.

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Nadaroot Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2008
wow. this is so close to my life, it's not even funny. well, actually it is. but anyway- it's definatly a :+fav:
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